Mama Down!

On the first day of March, my cold came in like a lamb with a scratchy, sore throat (but Abby did the laundry.).

On the second day of March, my cold was a reality because my nose started dripping like freshly tapped maple trees (but Maggie took my temperature…about 800 times).

On the third day of March, my cold was in full force and it put me to bed before 8:00 with no remorse (but Ben did his homework without reminders).

On the fourth day of March, my cold continued to linger with sneezes so full blown I almost offered the middle finger (and my husband leaned away from me!).

15 responses to “Mama Down!”

  1. I relate to this so much! The cold has hit me too! Hopefully, we make a quick recovery!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Let’s hope this cold doesn’t reach the twelve day mark. Yea for the kiddos pitching in to help.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. If it hits twelve days, it will be sitting in the hot AZ sunshine right along with me!

      Like

  3. Cause: Jen gets sick. Effect: Loving family pitches in and the household doesn’t miss a beat! You clearly illustrate the progression of the cold and how it effects those around you. Fun slice! (And I hope it leaves quickly!)

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Oh no! I hope you feel better soon, but maybe fake it for a while so the kids will keep doing laundry, and doing homework without reminders!

    Like

    1. Spoken like a mother, Katie! Excellent advice!

      Like

  5. I love how each vignette features someone different. They all had their way of taking care of you…. and their reactions give us such insight into who they are.

    Like

    1. You’re right. Their personalities do shine in the few words they are mentioned (especially my husband!). Thank you for bringing this to my attention.

      Like

  6. I’m so sorry, sorry for you and your cold but also for laughing out loud at your post! Such a clever way to share the awful news that is a cold! Hope you feel better soon. I can only imagine how funny your posts can be when you are feeling 100%!

    Like

    1. It gives me great pleasure knowing you laughed! I needed to make fun of this situation because my entire household has been completely healthy. I’ve seen the boogers in first grade lately. I should have known I was going down!

      Like

  7. I love when the rest of the family steps up! Hang in there and feel better. I love each paragraph even more especially the last one!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. You grabbed me with the title and kept me with the structure of it. The simplicity and repetition tell a powerful story – with a laugh at the end. What could be better than that! So glad you are sticking it with and finding a way to laugh — well done and feel better.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you! So far into this challenge, the writing ideas have presented themselves naturally.

      Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: